#1 Ideas: The main idea in this story is that friendship is very important. It also is trying to tell us that princesses and witches can be friends and this means that everyone no matter how different can be friends.
#2 Organization: This piece was organized well and everything made sense. Every paragraph came in at the right time and it was easy to understand.
#3 Voice: The authors voice is very imaginative and that’s why she wrote such a creative book.
#4 Sentence fluency: The sentences in this book were perfect.